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Old 01-18-06, 09:48 PM   #6
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Voted For: Tech Skillz

Flow: Tie both seemed kinda of off
Metaz: Tech
Punches: Tech
Personals: Sold
Multies: Sold

v-Tech

Tech.... it seemd like u had a couple lines in the wrong place.....seemed like the FRONT LINES shoulda been ur second line....other than that, good verse

Soldier..... Dynasty - Die Nasty lines are way played out.... Broken Condom lines are even more played out....and even then, nothin else was really hittin, ya needa ty to come up wit somethin original.....if u always go with obvious rhymes and metaz, they will always be played out, these days u needa dig deeper

good verses both of u, but Tech got this
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