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Old 01-19-06, 04:15 AM   #9
JTR
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Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth
The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's...
............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof
Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men
if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again

vs.

We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first
While I decided to prewrite..
..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse
Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit
But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment
And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps
Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match

I like the one story line but felt is worded kinda off, like how you just randomly said you'd tell a story, other then that, this was a good battle, I judged kinda hard here, but uh, I got mim taking this by 1 quotable, and quotables don't tell the whole, all of Mimesis lines I didn't quote > All of TM's lines I didn't quote.

v/mimesis
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