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Voted For: Tech Skillz
JC REAL:
as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
5/10 - Good Multi's.
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
3/10 - Bad.
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
3/10 - gay n played.
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
2/10 - he fuckin' wit a easy win.
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
5/10 - ok punch.
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
3/10 - stupid closer.
=21/60
You had a good flow, your punches were pretty bad, you didnt use any good wordplay. Up ya Game!
Tech Skillz:
You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
6/10 - Good Punch.
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
6/10 - haha, niice punch.
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
5/10 - decent.
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
6/10 - Good Wordplay.
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
4/10 - Weak Closer.
=27/50
You had a good flow, you used some strong hitten punches, and some good wordplay.
OVERALL:Tech Skillz gets my vote, he had the better punchlines, his wordplay was better. He used good multi's and overall had a good verse, made me chuckle a couple or times.
JC your rhymes need some serious work. Your flow is ok, you use some good multi's but your punchline are basic and played and you dont have any wordplay. Work on this shit or stick to battlin' newbs - Just advice, no Hate!
Vote - Tech Skillz
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