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Old 01-19-06, 03:12 PM   #14
Snypa
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Voted For: *Antic*

Flow: Tech
Metaz: Tech
Similes: Antic...................................
Punches: Antic
Personals: Dunno.............lol
Creativity: Tie

v-Antic

Tech, u were not very consitant through this battle, kinda fell of on some punches and then came back on others, try to remain constantly hard

Antic, too many similes (like/as) almost ruined the effect of ur verse if u did not have those punches, using metaphors (without like/as) has more of an affect and can greatly improve ur punches
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