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the beat is a west coast classic....the intro/hook but it's a little to long maybe if u just said it two times....the flow seems imo a little shaky maybe it's the delivery....it's smooth but sounds like it can be smoother....punches seemed to have a lot of personals...i think u should of had more of a verse instead of kicking another chorus after your first verse. this was a decent diss nice work
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