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Old 01-20-06, 07:47 PM   #5
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both are right...fix your lines, even if it is a fast rap you need to shorten them up so peeps will read it, i read it and your flow was definately off and your rhyming needs to improve homie......do what we tell you and you'll be better

rtf in a OM or A Battle
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