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This was feedback posted for MuRkInEm
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Pointless to even begin,no-one likes merk..they all Hatin on your fight
Wastin your verse?why bother,you've already wasted your life
concept ok, punch is weak, wordplay is ok
You must be really late,dyke..cuz all's ya shit's played,it's been done before
Ur like a bird down it's last breath.. that still hasn't begun to soar
a lil played out
It's fun,for sure..pickin' on you & being a bully,can't say i don't love it
& Rap's called a mountain to some,so i can say u fell off the summit
Nice wordplay, your best punch in your verse
Hell,your a dumb bitch,that's stays clueless..you got no sense
If dicks were balloons you'd prolly be the first to blow them
Lol nce punch - ok wordplay - played out concept
Let go of the pen,it's like murder..cuz your beyond wack
your verse can't "strike"..like havin' an unbreakable contract
nce wordplay ok punch
Cats may say some ya shit's dope..but that's only cuz u bit those
But Lyrically insane it is............. to even think that your shit's dope
Nice closer - good punch
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Dumb. To think this cat's a natural killa~
When the most violence he's seen is the vid.eo to Thrilla~
ha lol nce punch - good opener
Rakim's his avy, more convenient it couldn't have been~
Cause when this' is over ya'll gonna say I Rak(d h)im~
good concept, should have worded it better - played out
I'll split him, pull his spine out and spin it on the tip~
I'm not kidding, the boy will be doing backflips~
lmfao nce worplay - best punch in your verse
I'm badd when I spit, it could be called verboten~
Mangle his hand, leave him a finger so the other fo(u)r()gotten~
Nice wordplay - ok punch
Nine lines already, damn not enough to address your flaws~
But hey, a full size novel couldn't even address them all~
Good concept - ok punch - ok closer
damn good battle both really had hard punches so when it all comes down i looked who was more creative and wittier
both textees really did good on this battle and came with some good wordplay and punches
but wit no hate i think MerkInEm came a little more wittier and creative so he gets my vote
Vote = MerkInEm
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