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Old 01-21-06, 09:06 PM   #6
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this is pretty good hd...kinda feeling it.
your verse was good...shit made me chuckle a few times.
synz verse was nice.
only real critique i could give you is that you need to match the beat. your lyrics were there...but the beat seemed fast paced and intense, and you sounded pretty laid back when you were rhyming.
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