for teh most part this was decently worded with well thought out symatery between lines... though a line here and a line there were awardly worded... this was a decent read with good imagery... you painted the picture of what was going on with ease... You also had a really good use of vocabulary... with that being said there was nothing in this that really stands out... no over whelming bars, or amazing lines... solid... but not blazing piece...

*Vanishes*

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