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Old 01-22-06, 12:12 PM   #4
J. Luth
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beat dope word.

hook is aiight if that what you start with..... vocals need to be upped.

like I seriously can't hear you yo.

but your flow there, voice coo. can't hear many lyrics, what i hear seem coo. good delievery.

track, voice coo. vocals need to be upped to. delivery coo, could be upped more. emoiton coo. Lyrics nice. Like the beat stops you guys put all throughout. lol nice touch. Hook in end i can actuallyunderstand haha

overall, pretty solid drop. both came coo. both elevating. keep it up. pc.one.

RTF UNF if you could, thanks track for feed:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220184
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