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Old 01-22-06, 12:28 PM   #6
Ca'lam
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lol im starting to think you have a fetish thing for Chris Brown.. this is the third song spul .....NO MORE lol..


chris brown is decent.. theres better singers i know lol..

lol at that damn smoke detector..

yea.. i agree wit seven.. its good.. only word i would change is when you say " I just swoop in and take it" change it to shit.. sometimes you gotta cuss to make it go.. in this case it would be a pretty good line with it..

good drop tho..i really like how you commin out now spully.. *tears up*
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