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Old 01-22-06, 02:31 PM   #4
J.D
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aight listenin.......

dope beat, feelin it.......

UNF-came in nicely, flow is tite, and delivery is pretty dope. volume level is just right, maybe a little too loud, quality is pretty much perfect. your lyrics are decent aswell im hearin alot of decent punchlines (the used ferrari line was dope! lol)

trakk starr- flow is decent, delivery has improved alot. levels are perfect, quality is also good. lyrics are pretty good, although there were a couple of quite basic bars, the rollercoaster bar was pretty decent, i woz feelin that. yerr not much bad bout your verse really, other than i'd try and get more creative wit your punchlines nd shit.

overall- this woz a decent track actually, not much i can complain about lol. i think i wud've made it longer actually, like spit 4 bars each for a 3rd verse or sumthin, but other than that this is a decent drop from you two. 8.5/10


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