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getting better by the track man....i like the flow on this one better than your others...and your delivery....work on pronunciation....speak a lil more clearly...i mean..its not bad...just could be a bit clearer...thats my only complaint..

2nd dude....be a bit more loud man...gotta work on your presence...this isnt bad....but your delivery and presence could be upped and this would be pretty good....

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