I love the idea of the of the song fam definitely.. flow is good but like Tripple N said you need variation to add flavor to your verses. THe hook is the strong point of the song but the quality takes away from that. You just need to learn how to use the de-esser and the compressor to keep your levels about even. Cause it bounces a bit. The 3rd verses was lower than the other two verses. But the emotion is there everything you need is there you just have to construct it properly and you have a great song on your hands. WHen you're recording at home rapping is only half of the battle. i learned that first hand. You can have a dope song but the quality makes it average. Mixing is a very big part of recording at home so you have to master that as well.. good shit overall though just a couple minor set backs...

Young!