THIS IS GOOD BUT YOU NEED TO RHYME THIS MORE LISTEN TO YOUR FIRST AS I'VE MULTI-RHYMED IT this is yours

Apple rinds, and scattered crumbs;
With spoon in foot it's time to dine.
Nothing like a dinner set for two,
Enjoyed in solitude to practice sums
That come from being alone with you.

this is mine what you think of this?

Snapple and wine plus apple rinds scattered crumbs from
Shattered plums grab a spoon and have prunes with some
Rice and gravy food’s a winner true its dinner for two
Ready to get rude with attitude and a plate look boo
In the mood for great eating and solitude is nothing new
We’re a love strong crew when I’m alone with you