damn u killed the hook, and i dont mean that in the good way LOL

1st dood- TOO much emotion calm down, flows shakey, keep @ it, deliverys ok, just keep practicin

2nd dood- voice is ok, i dunno wiether i like or not :S anyways, flows better then 1st dood, but still shakey, pretty coo tho. keep @ it also

decent drop, but u shudnt have tried this beat no one can do this but banks lol, u need that monotone style for this shit

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