Well your vocab and creativity isnt all that, but that improves with time.

Your main focus right now should be improving your structure and learning not to use unnecessary words... Your lines may look extremely long, but theyre actually not as stretched as people have been saying. Ill show you what I mean using an excerpt from your piece.

"abc to the 123 simple english mathematics,these actors clownin my rhymes,
but im bringin dat drama like cinematics,its tragic,writin balistics,tweakin
they characteristics,rising above the hectic hate,debate my philosiphy,
cuz these hataz aint stoppin me so i blow'em away like i do the smoke from chronic,isn't it ironic,these moronic idiots cant see my diabolical scheme is demonic//"

should be

"abc to the 123, simple english mathematics,
these actors clownin my rhymes, but I bring drama like cinematics,
its tragic, writin balistics, tweakin they characteristics,
here is a flow error. this should be another "istics" rhyme line.
rising above the hectic hate, debate my philosiphy,
need more syllables cuz these hataz aint stoppin me
so i blow'em away like i do the smoke from chronic, isn't it ironic...
these moronic idiots cant see my scheme is demonic"

See how much easier to read that is? And with those flow fixes it flows a lot better too, but its essentially the same shit that you wrote just structured and worded slightly different.

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