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Old 01-23-06, 09:15 PM   #2
trakk*star
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listning.......................................... .......

beat coo.............................................

flows off and on.....................................

delieveryz lackin too..................................

lyircs r cool..........................................

qualityz ight..........................................
hooks plain but ight

snypas verse

falls off at first(sound like u spittin to fast)

deleivetys ight.....................

emotions good.............................

pressence is ok

hook again blahhhhhhhhh

prozac...................................

flows off....................................

delieveryz off..........................

lyrics r ight(lol at tha names)

emotions gettin better..................
pressence is gettin better

alot could of been worked on in this it was ight i guess.....................................
but lacked tha thingz i said keep droppin and ill leave a link innna min
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