damn!!! definately nice shit....the topic was just amazing and the way you described marks way of moving, thinking and just expressions made me feel like i was watching a damn movie. the whole way you stit was real nice....definately a HOF. really liked how you finished it off and you detailed how he does things without trying to overdue on vocab.... i liked this line as well

Exhaling on the window but wishing he could breathe life

that lines was dope....great job yo...rtf and keep it up

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