This was cool, nice rhyming in some places and i saw a few multies thrown in there too, which is good. But u might wanna add a few more especially at the end of ur rhymes. This seemed like it was kinda done quick also, i kno u can put more into it, cuz ive seen some ur rhymes in the cypher and they were pretty good. But keep it up man, u doing good. Hit me up on 1 of my open mics. Peace.