this was cool, not bad....some lines, eh, didn't like the mtv diary line, heh, just me....uhmm, lol, i just watched pearl harbour on the weekend, good stuff, getting better man, flow is better, rhyming is improving, stepping it up, i like that....

I need a pad and pencil when im mad or sentimental

that line was cool, didn't like the next one though, but you def are getting better, so keep up man, good job on the links too, worrrrrd

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