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Old 01-24-06, 02:35 PM   #4
Germ
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stfu lumberjack

yeah, this was pretty cool...not really original, but had some decent lines in there

I been a bad boy stompin in a big world
Lift florals in the snow yo.. my shit’s thorough
The kid boroughed, to get deep beneath the surface
Found what he couldn’t reach, than he unearthed it...

that was pretty cool, you have potential to be alot better, just expand on your thoughts, write and present your thoughts thoroughly, and you can be a decent head

keep up

ps, you need 2 links or i close this, ASAP
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