I was feeling this nice twist at the end,. good imagery, I felt u could have
gone more indepth and more emotional at the end,...

But it was a nice drop, flow was good, good use of vocab, used some nice
words in there like vortex and debonair nice.. the rhyming could have been
a lilttle more conplex but thats cool. decent emotions could have gone a
little more deep.

Overall really nice drop

stay up

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