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Old 01-25-06, 08:34 PM   #14
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i gotta go with sabre here...

His piece was just impressive. DQ you had a good verse but it was bland it held no emotion to me and you worded some stuff poorly. Sabre on the other hand used this topic to his advantage and posted a good verse, with amazing imagery and good emotion.

I think both could have used a bit more depth but as far as this battle goes, Sabre's gotta take it, he just took control of the verse and never loosened his grip. It was an easy read yet complex in its own form.


DQ: Overall: 7/10

Sabre: Overall: 8.5/10


Vote: Sabre
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