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Old 01-26-06, 06:45 PM   #5
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat what beat is this ive heard it b4 pretty cool
1st guy not feeling his voice his delivery or his flow to be honest hes boring t best kind fo annoying beat is overpowering his voice
hook is garbage lol boring simple rhyme scheme
you come in
flow is off in a few places very stop and go i can hear u breating work on that emotion wise i think u were right on point lyrics were pretty basic
some of ur overdubbs are off to0
ok track
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