Hey Black Queen..long time no see huh?
LoL

Aight..
I felt the concept of this was original.That was the best thing about it.
Some lines could have been a bit shorter..but,meh.
I think,for the most part..it was good.

But at times,it appeared as though you forced some rhymes.
Some of your rhyming was a little weird to be honest.

ie-Mirror-Fear more?..
Ain't feeling that.You'd have to accent way to heavy to pull that off.

Yeah.

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