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Old 01-26-06, 11:10 PM   #15
Enygma
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I'm digging this beat......for real. This isn't that bad. You seem to end your words short though......like, you say your words quick, but your flow isn't fast. Especially at the last word of each bar. You could use a little more behind your delivery too. Next dude had a little better presence but the rest was about the same as paranoid. Last dude I wasn't feeling at all. He sounded like he had a bag of nickles in his mouth.....for real. Another thing, the hook should have had a little effect added to it so it sounded separate from the verses.
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