alrighty alikka, i saw this piece awhile back and never got around 2 writing my feed. but i thought i was pretty good. nuttin really special. nice rhymes ok flow. had plunty of multys.
but i thought u could have done a lil better and made it with some feelings(emotions and such, anger hate love etc.)
but besides that it was good.
keep it up kid. and check out some of my freestyles.

for the haterz.
life.
lonely at night.

S to the Z.