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Old 01-27-06, 10:59 AM   #14
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So let me just attack this dude and snatch his jewels then whack this hersey./
His raps bad like they wack and blurry....
....but ill leave you more blak-and-blue then a Magics Jersey/
^No.Played as fuck.....

Im Game and u be remindin me of Yayo, im jus new and u still be gettin KO'd/
dont say no, stay low, u forced mo den how many 50 cents go into payphones/
???...that was aiight.but Not effective at all.

im wordin Acid- and FLames, im attackin wit pain, mai lines wud fracture ya brain, /
People claim u game, u Stealin da G and A, but still aint half of muh GAME/
No.

yo rhymes petty, you aint ready, your rhymes decrease while mines augment,/
u lyin, cuz the only time you got a nine in your pants is when you got penis enlargment/
^WTF!!!...Dont Ever Do That..Sounds Gay...Plus what kinda punch is this?


I destroy any nemesis masculine or-femenine-fags,/
I sever them... your a detriment you sucked off eleven men.. including my ass/
^No.


rhis guy below-me..named daubs. experenced-an-orgy/
did the train, and thas how they came up.....
.....with the theme for rice-a-roni/
Wack!

Overall/=really alot of played lines...none connect'd..an u had a few really strange lines...No hate,But Be more witty'er fah realz.


versus

he got locked up..he's stuck, fuck thinkin he's bad
how can we freestylez...when even his prewrittens are wack
^Aiight,But not Really Hard Hittin.

I let you in LL, it caused a bang like an explosion
fam saw wackness in you
but I only let you in when id decided to CLOSE them
^Hah.

i can imagine your house in LA..i know where you live sty
and your house isnt fat and pink, but its still pig,sty
^Lol..Nice concept,but a lil simple.

he comes with played shit like, "im sicker than infections"
so when he tryed out for 3 CREWS..
..he suffered TRIPLE rejection
^Okay,Aiight Personal.

il showdown how to rap n' make him think his stylez not wack
then pin him to the floor......and win with atack
^No.

that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse
^Ha,That Fucked me up...Nice spin on that other line.

ima use a keystlye to win, its all that i need
but if you keystylez...then my victorys guaranteed
^Meh...Bad Closer.

Overall/=Enough 2 win...Decent Drop...But Good enough,Ive seen better from you..So I know You Took it ez on him..

V/=Daubs.
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