k comes iin......intro is coo with the echo n stuff...

the hook...is ok...i think if it was mixed better and the quality was a lil better itd be a pretty ill hook....cause it has tons of potential to be very catchy..

1st dude....flow is ok...but the lyrics arent too great...need to work on that lyricism....voice is coo....delivery needs to be switched up a bit more...its not bad...it would just keep my attention more if u switched it up some throughout the verse...


UNF..your quality is weird and it makes it hard to make out what your saying..it seems like your backed away from the mic...may just be the way u mixed or something...lyrics seem ok...delivery is ok...presence could be a lil more "in your face"...but that may just be the mixing where it seems your backed away....

overall this isnt bad guys...a few minor mistakes here and there.....but nothing too drastic....keep working...you both have tons of potential

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