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Old 01-27-06, 07:34 PM   #2
Shawn Phillips
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From: North Siyyde
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ok break it down

V1- flows coo, lyrics iight, ure names played lol, i seen lik 50 ppl named Haze.. ure emotion is really, laid back.. its pretty coo but u need more emotion on this beat

V2- u sound almost like 50 cent.. flows pretty nice, emotions coo, deliverys nice, im feelin this verse.

Hook- said In Here way too much

V3- most of this is nice, flow falls off a few times. othder then that its str8.

V4- Deliverys coo, flows on most of the time, emotions str8, lyrics r coo, pretty nice verse

V5- i dont like the voice..on some barney shit lol.. other then that pretty hot. everythgn on. emotions dope.

OVERALL: nice drop, i love this beat, ima have to say 2nd verse was the best on this track. but rest was nice too.

8/10
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