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H.D. vs ColdSTEEL
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01-28-06, 03:15 PM
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Chris Stylez
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
Cold Steel-Your structure to me was abit screwed the first time i read it but your punches were like close 8 while H.D. was like about a 5 or six. You had him in punches and content. You used some nice nameplay with his name defining with what it means.
H.D.-You had multi's but you just didnt capitolize on them or the punches right to make them hard hitting. Your punches where about adverage and i felt you could do better. Your structure was alright but still can use a lil help though. Just keep elevating
Punches-C.S.
Struture-H.D.
Multies-H.D.
Personals-C.S.
Wordplay-C.S.
Nameplay-C.S.
Content-C.S.
V/ Coldsteel
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