Succès Facile!
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IP:
Voted For: shodown
Sho... been around this block, and you can tell he's a veteran.
Peeh is like 2 buckets side by side.... Pales in comparison
(Good.)
We heard of the Pink Panther. You must be the Pink Panty
on a pussy that stinks badly. I mean look. You keep winkin' at me.
(Aiight,But Lol.)
young be fake like face lift, ur bars need some medication
ya rhymes...they ain't shit, looks like young got constipation.
(Played as Fuck,But The Spin You Put On It Werks.)
watch me straight rip out ya limbz!/stay quiet like MiMs.
'n they should call u tha "Marshall Mathers of Monopoly" cuz ya "Chances are SliM
(Stretched Like Pregnant Pussy<---*...But Its Good.)
^Overall/=The Concepts You Used Are Nothing New,But The Spin You Put On Em iz Good enough,Dont Stretch Ur lines Tho'.
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Aparently he tryna get me to be a parent you see
Dont care i drop right after he gets the check from me
(Good.)
In my state you'll to get crushed easily in rhymes like vine grapes
I throw the hardest punches so you know i got to have mine taped
(Aiight,Good Concept But Bad execution.)
^overall/=Average Verse But Nothing Special...I Like The Those Concepts but Try Executin it a lil better,Cuz Sho Got You With Tha Punches...No Hate Juss Being Factual.
Rtf On My battle With H.D....I'll Provide the Link.
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