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Power Hungry
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im likin the beat
ooooooh gooood
I am SO sorry, but I do NOT like love songs
like the content, cos I think love stinks
but, Imma judge this on flow, and addlibs and shit like that
the delivery is nice
addlibs are a lil bit too high.
flow messes up a LITTLE ITSY WITSY tiny bit, son
I like this girl's singin
what are you?
like what nationality?
cos you dont sound black, and you dont sound white
you sound...ionno
but you pronounce shit differently, not a bad thing at all, its just somethin I noticed
the 2nd verse
damn, you prolly should've made the 2nd verse your 1st verse
just the way you start it off
quality was a bit below average
if the quality was stepped up, this could be sort of a hit. lile in your area and shit
but word @ a Valentine's day track, man.
I SHOULD make one, but ionno
anyway, man, this shit wasnt bad at all, a few faults that can be fixed as you get more into audio. Im assumin you're just now startin out.
but word
yeah
what was I about to say!?
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Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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