good shyt UNF, on this were u usin ur new mic, cuz u should really put that mic to good use, im feelin tha lyrics yo, tha story itself is dope.....definately feelin that chorus, and the lil echoey thing u got goin on there, hot track mos def,and like Ike said, if u get the chance 2 do this in a studio definately do it
RTF
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