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Old 01-31-06, 01:50 AM   #3
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From: Adanac
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ehh, didn't really like this...i found it really hard to flow to, and i felt the message just wasn't delivered too well...i really liked this line though

I’m nothing to others, and I can never really compare,
But when it comes down to it, my intelligence is something to share.

i don't really know, i think its just the direction you took, couldn't get into it, first verse was cool, but then second just sounded like you were preaching, and it didn't work.....truth, was okay....but his flow was too choppy and he wasn't precise enough...liked his last line....

i unno, i've just seen better
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