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time passing us by (my version)
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01-31-06, 12:04 PM
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Trikky
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I liked the concept behind this piece. You need to work a little on your structure and play-on-werds... Multi's co9uld use a tiny bit of work too
All in all, nice verse. Keep ya head up Soljah!
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