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Old 01-31-06, 10:04 PM   #5
L.E
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Listening...

I used the same beat, with the exact same song title lmfao...

Flow starts off...it's choppy...it's on beat good enough, but there are alot of pauses. Lyrics are at some points basic, but they're straight. Hook is pretty straight...

Our hooks are even close...

Verse 2, flow is better...falls off at the end though...

Decent track, just keep it up, and you'll get better.
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