i absolutely love this man, u have a good grasp of vocabulary, i dont think the topic quite suits what u've written, but u have written beautifully. some great imagery in there

Rhyming to escape the tumult… for time sure takes its toll
You can demolish my flesh, yet it takes more to break this soul
love those lines, great finisher. keep it up.

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!