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Old 02-02-06, 09:59 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Eastsyde
when east grabs the mic other rappers wanna go on hiatus...
and when east drops an album all others get "taken off the shelf" like san andreas...
i'm listenin to some shit in the rap game let's face it, it's NOT RAP...
now i got haters all "on my dick" like a fuckin jock strap...
i just wanna kill myself but not because i'm depressed...
but just because a dead rappers album is guarentteed success...
and i'm sick of all these rappers tryin to act like pac...
don't even own a gun and say their gat might cock...
pac also went to jail but they don't get locked...
just play the end of his career right and go get shot...
anyways i grab mag machette the track...
kill any wack MC that always said he can rap...
i'm getting my stacks heavy like the federal tax...
i don't battle free, yup, i know i'm better than that...
just a lil something....i'ma punchline rapper at times...this just a lil piece i keyed up...





yeah not bad fosho.. flow was constant and good.. i liked that hiatus rhyme... messages were a bit mixed as such in the concepts.. just keep extending the rhyme variations and adding on yo

sa'll good

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