dis beats aiight...dis 1st kid sounds like he's all ova da track lyricz is ok flows ok deliverys not bad but it might be a lil 2 much nahmean...da hooks ok...snypa lyricz is coo sum lines were ok "so hot got da devil sweatin his ass off" *smh* @ dat...flows coo deliverys str8...dizaster again still not really feelin duke dis verse doesnt sound everywhere tho like da 1st verse...but dis track could use sum polishing really overall its decent...keep it up
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