I Chill in Asylums
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IP:
First off, u need to increase ur vocab cuz it was very simple in this piece. Ur flow was ok but u should at some more multies and internal rhyming into it to make it flow and sound better. Also u should come up with better punches and metaphors creating a more advanced sound to ur lyrics. I'll get at some more or ur om's when i can lata aight peace.
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