You're kiddin' me right? ... Honestly both verses mine and my opponants flowed rather nicely... once again if you do not undestand something do not vote... If you can not properly pronoun something that falls into the catagory of you do not understand... break up the words that either of us chose to rhyme with and there are plenty of multis in each verse... and as we all know multis make for an easier to follow and over all smoother flow...

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