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Old 02-03-06, 09:46 PM   #15
p4ntzistheish
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Voted For: .Compulsive.

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

Well this wasn't onesided.. [/sarcasm]

~Souljah~

First off your structure is fucked.


I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes

Umm no. Didn't even make logical sense. What the fuck? lol

this nigga'sLines are whored, drop a rhyme, I'm bored
flows like Scratched math CDs i've heard this niggas shit "times" before

Decent. Just decent.

This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it

Not a closer. Actually not even good.

.Compulsive.


Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"

Decent.

An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths,

I don't get it.

Pay Pals his bars from ebay just to make a 10 line verse,
straight punching this clown leavin him with more colors then Starburts,

Pretty good.

Gutting this Dickless bitch with priceless lines, strangle you with ya own embilicle cord,
I'd dismantle you in seconds if i was being serious... your lucky im bored,

haha. Got a chucle from this one.

Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,

Weak.

Overall: This was decent as a battle. Compulsive got it cuz he had more lines, or should I say more GOOD lines. Souljah work on vocab and puinches. Compulsive just adjust your lines a little and work or connecting with more personals and come harder. Word.

v/Compulsive
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