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Old 02-03-06, 10:19 PM   #13
p4ntzistheish
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Voted For: Venture

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

PSA battle. hehehe.

Venture


only way ya street wise is if you are next to hobos, you still a lie,
why do we need people to die for the dynasty? youre the sacrifice.

Sick

He actually thinkz hes good, and to me that’s a bit scary,
Hez been writing since 8? No wonder that shit soundz so elementary.

Hahaha. Nice punch

No one supports this kid, he aint got no one so don’t even lean on me,
He educates sickness and still many live guess he doesn’t teach anything.

Decent.

Young Dollar

Ay you know when I drop you can expect to hit the floor
Cuz I dont take MC's to school anymore, I merk'em to da morge

Decent

Yo my rhymes clean even though they seem obscene to another
Burn you off the scene,Till ya aint seen, like da mom of the venture brothers

If you don't watch the show you don't get it.

Yo crew v.s. same crew, i dont see what you tryna prove to you honestly
But it aint no heroic tale when you become the first to Die for the Dynasty

Not the greatest.

Overall: Well well well. This is my text competition in PSA. lol Nice battle you two. Venture got it with harder personals and better punches. Nothing else really to say here Nice battle though.
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