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GG Haterz
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Beginning was ok, but your lyrical content got worse and worse as the song kept going. Your emotion doesn't really fit the verses. You seem to be bored, you need to be hyped up, specially with this beat. Lay off the echoes too. Flow was ok, but with a mainstream beat, that's expected. Work on your breathing too.
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Originally Posted by Twisted Visions
50 nickle=less than 50 cent, go back to school you idiot
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