dude over did the emotion....and came off as fake..like for real...and it was onli realli him and not the other dudes..and personally the hook coulda been recorded in a way..to brign out the emotion...wit out all the over dramitizations.......

and yo...FEEL..wat yu saying..and LEARN ya verse before yu spit it..in the booth...and do that shit like yu mean it.....and ya emotion should be kew...

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