Voted For: rexless

H.D.
You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate
No real punch.
HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus
Again no real punch.
Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us
No punch.

You need to work on real punches, and not these, "I'm gonna kill you things." Also, try to avoid self glorification, cuz you only got 6 lines, and you wasted a punchline on glorifying.

rexless
Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet
You still said he was a vet, so this punch has no impact.
Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad (look down)
This concept could have been good, but your wording is bad.
but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera
Self glorification and no punch.

Work on your wording of punches, you have the potential, but right now your wording hurts your punches, and you've got ok concepts.
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This is tough, cuz HD didn't really have any punches, and rexless also didn't have any real punches, and if he attempted them, they didn't hit. I guess I vote for rexless for attempting a punch and wordplay.

v-rexless

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