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Old 02-04-06, 02:50 PM   #7
J. Luth
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aiight I grade as follows if anyone cares lol

50%-good
60%-really good
70%-dopeness
80%-straight ill son
90%- damn son you should be signed!!
100%- OMFG the battling version of Tupac is alive!!!!

but word let's go

mimesis:


Ill be the one to step first.. your check in shows me youll be left herb
Cause I may bite the dust.. but I'll leave you digesting whole deserts
shit's coo....... 6/10
Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you
Had byes to the Final Four..
..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to
coo........ 6/10
Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk
While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months
coo personal..... 6/10
Here's a follow up... with this beating you should start studying health
You can't get anywhere.. executing a style worse then somebody else
it's aiight....... 5/10
When you spit its the worst.. know that Im going to be kicking you first
Put so many Fractures on your face.. you'll start forming it into a verse
coo wordplay.......... 6/10
You queer..
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..I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this..
The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch
noo the vets line is so played son..... 3/10
Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool
Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO
ehh....... alright i guess 4/10
Sometimes I do go over the top.. making sure opponents'll turn and roll
But you have to hack accounts just to compile a few decent personals
personal, but still weak......... 4/10
Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack
While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps
lol good........ 7/10
Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right
And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site
lol it's coo....... 6/10
You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys
While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life
umm it's aiight........ 4/10

JTR's Picture..
JTR's Abs..
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..What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes
Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you
coo......... 6/10
That's PATHETIC, but I see that backround, know youll get smacked son
Your such a corn hopper you had to go skydiving to get off your last one
aiight........ 5/10
I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy
So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die
coo......... 6/10
And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L
Like,
..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males
personal, aiight tho not too hard hitting..... 4/10
But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin
My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton
coo......... 5/10
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Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude
Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too
nice....... good personal 7/10
Faggot, I tag team bitches.. leaving them whining.. but it's still sad.. see
...Because you only whined like a bitch when I beat you in the Tag Team
no..wtf? newby type punch soon. nigga please. 2/10
You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now
Cause you champed it..
..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out
ehh..... c'mon yo....... 3/10 [/n]
CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb
You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first
ehh it's aiight....... 4/10
I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid
..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with
c'mon.... you fallin' off =/ 3/10
How do you expect to win? Ya lost to 9th and ain't gonna own me neither
Though I would say you'd have a chance if you bit..
..but you didn't win the last KORV either
it's aiight..... 4/10
I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face
While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape
lmao that's jus ill....... 9/10
That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid
Cause you called us the Philbins..
..just to mimick what we do with your verses
LOL..... nice.....8/10

Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats
So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap
loool....... nice....... 8/10
That aint even it.. but Ill give you some free shots, as I like keeping it fair
Cause I dont like to box.. but nobody can stop me from beatin this square
lol... nice........ 6/10
Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin
..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English
ehhh..... it's aiight....... 4/10
Hensley, Fracture, Lama.. people you jack shit from, and it's nothing dude
You aren't ^ overdose cats.. but that's what we're hoping you'll up and do
lol nice....... 7/10

JTR Battling Himself..
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You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell
I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself
uh..... it's aiight..... 4/10
That shit is weak as fuck.. now theres no chance youll be beating me kid
Cause my punches are innaVader's.. while your just stuck eating my fists
lol nice wordplay....... 7/10
You seeing this shit? Headgames? That sounds homo and this whores gay
Even some damn golfers are trying to get away from that fucking foreplay
could have been so much better if worded nicr....5/10
That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit
You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit
cooo..... 5/10
Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first
Wackness is so Thoreau..
..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work
lmao... many might not get this.. but illness... I hated that shit.. 8/10
And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid
Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness
lol nice math wordplay... fuck math oh god. lol 6/10
It's like the Matrix.. when I step its like how Neo fights.. just beating guys
While when you decide to step up.. we all find out you're just a neophyte
lol..... coo..... 6/10
Here's a follow up.. that movie and your ranking.. ready to just run heads
Because I'm a machine.. so it's pretty dam obvious I'll leave this one dead
it's cooo.... 5/10
I seen that girl you were talking about.. and now I know that I will be fine
But HOW THE FUCK you need 6 dudes to tell you to bang a chick..
..and then still deny
ehh personal atleast........4/10

HeyKalashkinov: oh yeah, fuck you.
HeyKalashkinov: FAGGOT. YOU FUCKING FAGGOT.
Jaw Show Awe: word.

Let me rephrase this though... that shit is crazy.. but honestly dude, quit
Because how am I supposed to call you gay... when you'd just admit to it
eh... i see you getting it from convo, but I jus ain't feeling it to much...4/10
You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire
This may be your Training Day..
..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire
lol good wordplay.... set up tied in too..... good 7/10
Believe it's true.. I will be beating you, just hurting guys like a rapping star
An R ally.. is just going to get run the fuck over by my personalized Nascar
lol coo....... 6/10
It's real, fag.. and let me just say this shit again.. cause you will lose hoe
People'll say "Vote - R.. IP" when I ask what should be on your tombstone
nice......... 6/10
Let me say something.. Nobody predicts you to win.. so hide your rhymes
I mean, even ESPN is banking on voters wantin to read Outside The Lines
coo........ 5/10
...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father
And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water
lol........ nice........ 6/10
It's finally over for you... a little advice.. try your best to learn to rap shit
Red gave me this match... just so we could watch your Bull burn to ashes
ok....... 5/10

Ok, overall..... verse was good..... had a lot of good lines, and then a lot of wack shit that was like "Wtf? leave that shit out. but overall some nice shit..... Overall: 232/440 (53%)



JTR:

Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat
It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie!
lol nice....... 6/10
Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts
And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that
coo....... 6/10 p
Cheek bones swolen like mad, ya weak, it's true bitch
I'd beat ya ass, but it looks like someone already beat me to it
ehh.... not really hard hitting, and played kinda..... 3/10

Jaw Show Awe: I just wanna ask you a question
Jaw Show Awe: Does it not look like he has ears on the back of his neck?
Suomran Exid: *holds in laughter & takes deep breaths* No, it dosn't

You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect
And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back
...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck
lol coo.......... 6/10
Dudes a bloody wreck, i'll make him bloodier, bring the pain here
'Course ya nose is already redder then Rudolphs, and ya still can't reindeer
it's cooo.......... 5/10
I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die
Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes
lmao....... word......... 8/10
Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch
I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck
...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick
.... eh..... nah....... ain't feeling it... 4/10
I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars
Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are
lool.... good.......... 6/10


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I have a little surprise for you, son..


Fucking retard, you got me? nah, i'll still tear this bum apart
Cuz you didn't surprise shit, dude, I knew you were a bitch from the start
[d] nah........... not hard hitting..... 4/10

You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer
They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here
coo wordply........5/10
STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk
Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk
lol..... dope..... 8/10
Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie
I could dissmemeber ya crew
...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe
it's aiight..........4/10
You're out of luck, cheat, no one respects this whore
Pulls bitchmoves like an ass, but I still rectum more
good wordplay...........6/10
Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that?
Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man
...you'd swear nicole got fat
lool... nice 7/10
Just rot fast, dude you're fucking wack, no skills n'
I'll lay him on the floor like a turkish rug when I kilim
it's coo......... 5/10
You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch
I get a surgeon rip hoes
...while you just have one operating on you after I do it
ok........... 5/10
You're through kid, and chances are long gone
You could cook chinese food and still wouldn't have wonton
nice........... 6/10
Stop riding my long john, faggot, ya gang bangs shock
Like the capitol of thailand, you just Bangkok
lol........ nice......... 6/10
I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me
I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory
lol it's coo....... 5/10
Taking the win like burglary, kicking his chest so this hoe may break
Cuz killing a bitch is so Simp,son they'll re-open the OJ case
it's nice....... 6/10
I'll wreck her face, you're better to head for the fence and bolt
Cuz i'll just steeler win, like Pittsburgh did against the colts
aiight........ 5/10
You got some faults, what's true is you won't advance
Your wins will come to a Holt, but you aint the St.Louis Rams
decent........ 4/10
Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true
Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose
ok.......... 5/10
The truth, you're future is looking quite shady bud
I'll squish this chick like an insect when this lady-bugs
ok........... 5/10
I'm hating ya, just cuz you're like wack evolved
Man, i'm bacon ya, with no pig fat involved
ehh..... decent man......... 4/10
Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet
You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment
wordplay's there, just not as hard hitting..... 4/10
Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault
I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result
ehh, can see you had to rush shit..... decent.... 4/10
For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still
The way ya only Windu to cheating
...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council
pretty nice....... 6/10
Ya, so your rid the mods dick this tourney, why boast fag?
You Leia bitch on the bed and chewbacca little more then most fags
it's good......... 7/10

Asking me on aim where you can go to box and shit, the fuck you so eager to get knocked out for? And dissing my girl, shit i'd diss yours, but you aint ever had to rip on anyways.

And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me?
You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me
loool... that was ill........ 8/10
You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit
You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot
kinda played......... ok tho....... 5/10
Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son
You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson
tyson lines played with the biting....... decent... 4/10
Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova
Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah
loool that was tight........ 7/10
And you ever even spoken to a girl, not one relationship
but losings a bitch, oh, my bad, that makes one you're aquinted with
lool haha... nice........7/10
And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small
Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all
it's coo....... 5/10
Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick
We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick
dope..... 8/10
You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad...
...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad
nah.......... it's decent....... 4/10
And what's up with brining my girl into this, trying to diss her
For that, if I don't fuck you up in this battle
...i'll just fuck up your sister
[n] wtf? no yo.... not really hard hitting....... 3/10 [/b]
What's with her? She's 18 telling me she's 15, I want more sir
Aint nothing scary 'bout me macking, but I still horror
decent......... 4/10
And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus
You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus
it's coo........ 5/10
My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first
Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse
decent.... could have been worded better........ 4/10
Ya, get screwed, actually get nailed back
Cuz you blow hoe, and I aint talking 'bout a whales back
it's coo........ 5/10
I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack
I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass
it's ok........ 5/10
And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines
Cuz to match you...
...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time
personal, could of been worded better.......... 5/10

Basically you came really nice man with what was stacked up against you. But you too had a lot of gay shit that should of been left out, BUT....... since you keystyled like 60+ lines of it..... but yea, you had some real dope ones too. but overall a very good effort by you here. Overall: 230/440 (52%)


Quotables (8/10):


Mimesis:
I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face
While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape
That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid
Cause you called us the Philbins..
..just to mimick what we do with your verses
Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats
So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap
Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first
Wackness is so Thoreau..
..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work

JTR:
I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die
Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes
STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk
Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk
And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me?
You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me
Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick
We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick

OVERALL:
I am tight with both, but I still don't like how mimesis did that on last day, I mean wasn't really fair to JTR. But since 9th and Bull allowed it, can't knock mimesis off of that. But since that happened, REALLY gave JTR huge handicapped. and I think he did very good job at coming back from that. and battle was really close. But I think Mimesis jus had a punch or two better than JTR. Iunno, it's sad that this battle couldn't have stayed at the 28 lines, would have been much better, and maybe even other way. But being as how it is, mimesis edged JTR off by a lil bit....

good battle by both tho. this can still go either way

v/Mimesis
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