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Old 02-04-06, 06:04 PM   #9
Paranoid
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trak starr:
I like your voice a lot. but you lack delivery, you need to delivery more hard man, flex your voice a bit if you want or just scream it a little more to fit the beat. your lyrics were good and so was your flow. overall it was decent.

snypa:
you shoulda upped your vocals a bit more to stay on a level with traks because yours are even low for the beat as well. but anyway I thought you had a decent delivery and a good flow. lyrics were staight and pretty much you did a nice job.

overall decent track.

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